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I am excited to be here to bring you a guest post today from Lee Anne Wonnacott. Please help me give her a warm welcome to the blog!
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I am excited to be here to bring you a guest post today from Lee Anne Wonnacott. Please help me give her a warm welcome to the blog!
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Building a Fictional Character
Sometimes I can be walking or driving somewhere and I’ll
see a face of an older person. The
facial lines, the squint or furrowed brow sets off that face from the crowd
around it. Veterans gatherings have dozens of faces that thousands of stories
to tell.
There are times when I’ll see a news article or story
about someone who has done something wrong or against the law and a face will
jump out. Motorcycle gangs, railroad workers, and carnival workers have that
been-around-the-block look on their faces.
The seasoned, knowledgeable human does not hold their
eyes wide open so you can see the white around the iris. Wide open eyes are
associated with children and innocence and naivete. That wide-eyed wonderment.
It is a practiced behavior in an adult to give this wide-eyed appearance. Some
can pull it off and make it believable but others come across as fake.
One exercise that I use quite often is to get on Fiverr
and give five photoshoppers two pictures of two different men. I ask that they
merge the picture to create the face of a new man. Each rendered image looks
unique because it is the perception of the photoshopper and the manipulation
tools used.
It is that rendered image that I blow up to an 8-1/2 by
11” portrait and hang on the wall. I have a set of questions that I ask myself
about that face.
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Who are you?
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Where have you been?
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When did you leave X and go to Y?
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What have you done?
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Why do you have that scar?
WHO
ARE YOU?
The answer to this question is not a name. It is more
like a “What.” A good man gone bad. A schoolteacher who snapped one day and
picked up a gun. A man who was fired off his job and decided to go back for
revenge. People who find themselves in stand-offs, hold-outs, barricaded, and
sequesters have done it for a reason. Maybe it is a man who went to war and the
war never left him.
Sound familiar? There
are dozens of local and regional news stories piecing together the background
about people. Day by day, new tidbits are uncovered and a clearer, broader personal
picture is created. Start reading the news in a different way to pick out these
stories.
For example:
Something happened to the man in the last few hours or days that sort of
“last straw” moment. He was fired. His wife walked out. Things had been piling
up on him for years. Someone comes forth with a childhood incident/story and it
shows the man was this way since the third grade. That is your background. From
those incidents that is where you start to build the “who” in your character.
I start by printing off these news stories and assemble a
dossier on my nameless man. Sometimes it is only a few days before I have a
good background built. Other times, it
can take months.
There are 5 specific areas in a background that fill in:
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Someone who worked with him said-
·
Someone he drank or hung out with said –
·
Neighbors said –
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A former teacher said-
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A deputy or police officer said-
This is designed so that no one person can know the whole
story about this man. It is a conglomeration of information that forms the
picture in the reader’s mind. And it is an assembly of information over time.
You want to paint an abstract picture of a life so that the reader must think
about the personality of your character. You want the reader to “tell me more.”
Try
this on for size: A
former coworker talked about how his car had broken down alongside the road one
late night. Your character was driving
home from his shift and stopped to help.
A partying friend talked about how your character would
buy a round of beers for the table down at a local watering hole.
A neighbor from many years back told a chilling tale
about how she got up one morning and found your character out in his back yard.
He was repeatedly striking a length of pipe on something on the ground but
couldn’t see what. Angry, swearing,
grunting, violent, as if in a rage.
A teacher from the eighth grade talked about how once or
twice a month your character would come into class with a split lip, black eye,
or favoring a scabbed over hand. None of the other kids had seen him in a
fight. Your character came to school this way from home.
A police report on a warehouse break-in cites your
character stopped for questioning. He had sprained his ankle, limping down two
blocks over. The officer thought your character had been carrying something but
could not find anything.
You want to space out the information over chapters so
the reader gets slices and fractions of your character’s personality. It is the
age-old question that you see all the time: Who is this man?
WHERE
HAVE YOU BEEN?
I like to ask that picture on the wall about where they
were before they were here. Remember, today’s bus drivers and truck drivers are
not all that much different from the stagecoach drivers of the 1800s. Everybody
has been somewhere. Some people have been everywhere.
Do a search on the mass murders of the 20th
century and you’ll read about how they mostly stayed in the same area or
traveled between two or three points.
“Jerry started working for us
back in 2001. I know he had worked the Alaskan oil pipeline. He had this big
scar on his shoulder from some accident up there.”
Jackson, Mississippi.
The wilds of western Canada. Brownsville, Texas. The Sonoran Desert.
Mars. Even if it is just around the corner, we all have been somewhere else
besides home. When you build the
background, hint or allude to something heinous that happened somewhere else.
Give the impression that the man is now here to start “fresh” again. Maybe he
is trying to forget something but don’t identify what it is that he is trying
to forget.
I am not skilled in having a character think about his
past in much detail. I can do a heartache for a love lost. I can do a regret
for a past action, like having to sell stuff to keep food on the table. I
cannot do a broken mind teetering on the brink of madness. The best I can do
that the man is, “touched in the head.”
To me, it does not serve a purpose for a character to
constantly dwell on past failures or count his regrets repeatedly. My
characters acknowledge that it happened, they may make a silent vow it will
never happen again, and then move on down the road to the future. I want my
characters to be more from where they have been rather than how they were
brought up.
Try
this on for size: Man
was born in West Virginia. Father moved them to Ohio at age 4. Nice life.
Man joined army and saw Louisiana. Discipline and
behavior problems in military. Discharged.
Started up his own computer repair business. Started
looking for love in Ohio.
Flew to California to visit friends. Stayed for ten
years. Something bad happened. Flew back to Ohio, homeless. Something bad
happened.
Flew to Florida to get away from the bad. Stayed for four
years living on the bayou, drinking, and shrimping. Now you have a forty-year
old man who has been back and forth across the US. He cannot seem to hold a
job, bad luck in love, a drinking problem and likes to bare-fist fight. Where can you take this character?
WHEN
DID YOU LEAVE X AND GO TO Y?
People one day packed up everything, got on a boat and
months later landed in the New World. My next-door neighbor loads up his big
Harley and heads for New Orleans because he feels like it. Or maybe it is time
for the Sturgis run.
I like to use Mother Nature as the impetus to push
someone from point A to point B. When the first snow falls in Calgary, it is
time to ride south. When the geese fly south, it is time to move to a warmer
climate. Snowbirds head for Arizona and California for the winter. River
flooded from a storm. 115-degree heat in Las Vegas.
“The morning I woke up and the power was out
and I had ice on the inside of my windows, I knew it was time to head for
Phoenix.”
I was greatly impressed and astonished about the number
of long-time residents of Mississippi and Louisiana who relocated after
Hurricane Katrina. Houston, Atlanta, Oklahoma City and other towns became the
new homes for people displaced by the storm. New stories in the paper told how
people were just plain tired of rebuilding and wanted to move on to somewhere
they could settle.
The other ploy I like to use is the perception that a
murder or killing is in the recent wake of someone moving to another
location. Scabbed over cut on a lip, a
black eye and man who favors his left leg kind of gives the impress that he has
been in a scrape. He bears the physical evidence of a beating. This is what
happened to him and he is still standing. You want the reader to ask about what
happened and where.
One caution here. When you include children under the age of 10
in the “where” equation, you risk a whole other emotional overload from fans.
Some cannot tolerate children being subject to the antics of a violent person.
I’ve seen this in stories about children in families where the parents murdered
an older child. Some fans are turned off by this and animal violence, as well.
Try
this on for size:
Your character used a crow bar to wedge open that back
door of a store in Bakersfield. No alarm. No dog. Inside he took clothing,
socks, and a pair of shoes. Five minutes, he was gone. Four days later, your
character is rousted from sleep in an alley in Reno by a police officer and
told to move along. He did.
Three days later your character gets on an apple picking
crew outside of Walla Walla, Washington. When the first dusting of snow drops,
your character heads for Seattle and a long-lost friend. Except the friend is
gone.
In a bar, your character hears about a fishing boat on
the docks leaving for Alaska for the winter crabbing season. The boat needs
strong hands. Your character now lives for six months in Alaska.
All along the way, you have your character do something
that portrays his desperation. Petty crimes. Robberies. Shoplifting. Something
that drives him on to the next location. Give your character the “running form
the crime” attitude. It is a drifter existence. A nomadic life. And you as a
writer and author leave a trail of broken locks, broken bones and lucky breaks
in his wake.
WHAT
HAVE YOU DONE?
A while back there was a huge shoot-out between a couple
of motorcycle gangs in Texas. Over fifty people were arrested for assorted
charges. As each one came up for
indictment, their personal history began to come out.
One man’s legs were gnarled and severely scarred. He had
trained fighting dogs for years and suffered bites and attacks from his pupils.
Read these stories and connect someone’s real life background to your fictional
character.
I like to use the tool of selective memory. The man only
talks about something that he did to get by.
“Why,
yes, Mark. I’ll marry you. But before we go any further, I need to know exactly
how you lost your big toe on your left foot.”
“I
told you about that. Why do you have to keep bringing that up? Don’t you believe me when I tell you about
something horrible that happened to me? Can’t you accept what I told you?”
I have a character that used to do armed hold-ups of
stagecoaches from Missouri to Phoenix. He was nursing a flesh wound at a
campfire when a deputy stopped in. The man didn’t want to admit to getting shot
while in the robbery attempt.
“Aw, you know women. They throw things when they get upset. I’m letting her cool down for a day or two, officer. Nothing we ain’t been through before.”
Also, not everyone walks around with a beautiful halo
hovering above them. Even the best of men have shortcomings and failings. Maybe
your character discovered the cure for lung cancer, single-handedly
terra-formed Mars and solved the world hunger problems. He also suffers from hemorrhoids and ingrown
toenails that make him want to kill something.
I wrote a story years ago about a man that had stolen a
pencil in the third grade. Later, he sold off his girlfriend’s purebred Siamese
cat because he hated the cat. He hotwired cars just for the fun of it. The
character graduated to being a driver of the getaway car. Someone showed the
character how to fuse a stick of dynamite so he took to blowing doors off
buildings. The character could squeeze into small places. He squeezed into the
wrong place and woke up to find himself on a container ship headed to South
America.
As you write your character, inject his personal pet
peeves. Write about what he cannot stand.
You know people who can’t put mustard and mayonnaise on the same piece
of bread. You know people who don’t use electronic appliances on New Year’s
Day. You know people who fixedly recycle everything. Use those on your
character.
Those personal pet peeves might be the reason why your
character does something.
WHY
DO YOU HAVE THAT SCAR?
There are three reasons why people have scars. Mother
Nature, another human being, and myself.
Mother
Nature
Tree fell on me
Wind blew shingle off the roof and it hit me
Lightning struck a power line and the arc jolted me
Dog/horse/cow/elk/cat/snake bit me
Sun burned me
Earthquake/Flood/Hurricane did that to me
Another
Human Being
Knife fight
Bar fight
Buckshot
Broken bottle
Lynched
Hit by a car/truck/scooter/bicycle
Myself
Cut myself shaving
Tripped and fell
Car accident
Slipped off trail/bridge/road/path
Hammer/saw/screwdriver/knife missed and hit me
Climbing over/crawling under/squeezing through someplace.
I am not shy about asking strangers about scars and
tattoos. I want to know why that man is missing his eye. I want to know how
that Chief Petty Officer lost the end of his left thumb. I want to hear about
how that firefighter got burned down his neck and arm.
It signifies a level of common stupidity when a character
admits to doing something ridiculous. The reader empathizes. Inside of us is
the secret about us doing exactly that. We get a memory flash going back over
that little white scar on our left forearm. One of the most human things you
can do to make your character real is to have him do something that has
happened to you.
Some scars reveal the fortitude and bravery of the
individual. One man I met had been in his garage doing bandsaw work for a new
kitchen. The kids and dogs ran out into the garage, crashed into the man and he
lost his hand and forearm to the bandsaw. Rather than just bleed out right
there, he tied a tourniquet onto himself and dialed 911 before passing out.
I wrote about a cowboy character who had been moving
fifty head along the rim of a mesa. The herd spooked and shoved the horse over
the rim. Cowboy had time to rope an old stump and wrap the rope about the
saddle horn. The horse dangled in midair from the saddle. Cowboy was left
dangling by his belt from a stirrup with his left arm gushing blood from the
rope burn. I left him there for six hours until a little old man and wife
trotted along in their wagon.
Do something to your character that will make someone
else walk up and ask, “Mister, why do you have that scar? What happened to you?”
I have one of those minds where I can see a painting of
an old, broken down barn and within five minutes tell you about the men who
used to work in it. That barn on Walking
Dead where all those zombies were kept is the end result of someone dreaming up
what to do with a country barn.
That old 1948 Cadillac sitting in an Arizona barn is
prime fodder for my imagination. You can dream up the men and women who drove
it. Your character can light a cigarette and tell you about how he got that
dent in the front end. The wife of your character can tell you about giving
birth to their first born in the back seat on the way to the hospital. The
grandson can tell you the story about how he found his grandparent’s dead in
that Caddy.
When you build a character for your novel, try building
it around one event. I knew a man who was in the back-passenger seat with
friends as a group of six was headed out to club for the night. Other truck ran
a red light and t-boned the car on the passenger side. Man ended up in a
wheelchair. Write your story about what happened up to the crash event. Write
your story starting immediately after the crash event. Focus on the man’s
trials and tribulations on a succession of wheelchairs.
Last month, another writer friend showed me the photoshop
merge of her father’s picture and that of Tom Selleck. Craggy, sneered grin,
dancing eyes, bushy brows. The writer’s father passed on in 1996 so she won’t
have to suffer his comments. She will use the image for a six-book series about
an interstate truck driver.
Get started.
SUMMARY
Building a fictional
character can be started by answering five questions: Who are you? Where have
you been? When did you leave X and go to
Y? What have you done? Why do you have that scar?
By using current events and
news stories as well as your own background, you can build a dynamic fictional
character. Every day around the world people experience life and you can apply
those to your writing to make it more real. This article walks you through how
to do just that.
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